Misc improvements and rewordings in the first pages

src/help-feedback.md

@@ -1,8 +1,14 @@
 # Help
 
+We hope this tutorial will work for you.
+
+But if it doesn't (the format may not work well for everyone, and that's okay), we encourage to look at [some other resources](resources.md), which might work better for you.
+
+It's also fine to **take a break from time to time**; feel free to read at your own pace.
+
 If you are stuck in a certain part of the tutorial, want some advice, or just wish to chat with us, [the GBDev community chat](https://gbdev.io/chat) is the place to go!
 The authors actively participate there so don't be afraid to ask questions!
-(The "ASM" channel should be the most appropriate to discuss the tutorial, by the way.)
+The `#asm` channel should be the most appropriate to discuss the tutorial.
 
 If you prefer email, you can reach us at `tutorial@<domain>`, where you replace `<domain>` with this website's domain name.
 Anti-spam measure, I hope you understand.

src/index.md

@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
 👋 Welcome to gb-asm-tutorial!
 This tutorial will teach you how to make games for the Game Boy and Game Boy Color.
 
-:::warning:⚠️
+:::tip
 
 While the Game Boy and Game Boy Color are almost the same console, **the Game Boy Advance is entirely different**.
 However, the GBA is able to run GB and GBC games!
-If you are looking to program GBC games and run them on a GBA, you're at the right place; however, if you want to make games specifically for the GBA, please check out the [Tonc](https://gbadev.net/tonc/) tutorial instead.
+If you are looking to program GBC games and run them on a GBA, you're at the right place; however, if you want to make games specifically for the GBA, please check out the [Tonc tutorial](https://gbadev.net/tonc/) instead.
 
 :::
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ You can also help **translating** the tutorial on [Crowdin](https://crowdin.com/
 **In short**:
 
 - Code within the tutorial is essentially **public domain**, meaning that you are allowed to copy it freely without restrictions.
-- You are free to copy the tutorial's contents (prose, diagrams, etc.), modify them, and share that, but you must give credit and license any copies permissively.
+- You are free to copy the tutorial's contents (prose, diagrams, etc.), modify them, and share that, but you must give credit and license any copies under the same license.
 - This site's _source code_ can be freely copied, but you must give a license and copyright notice.
 
 **Full details**, please follow these links for more information on the respective licenses:

src/part1/bin_and_hex.md

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Here's how digits work:
 And here we can see the digits that make up the number!
 ```
 
-:::tip:ℹ️
+:::tip CONVENTION
 
 `^` here means "to the power of", where `X^N` is equal to multiplying `X` with itself `N` times, and `X ^ 0 = 1`.
 
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ And, don't worry, decimal can still be used 😜
 
 (Side note: one could point that octal, i.e. base 8, would also work for this; however, we will primarily deal with units of 8 bits, for which hexadecimal works much better than octal. RGBDS supports octal via the `&` prefix, but I have yet to see it used.)
 
-:::tip:💡
+:::tip
 
-If you're having trouble converting between decimal and binary/hexadecimal, check if your favorite calculator program doesn't have a "programmer" mode, or a way to convert between bases.
+If you’re having trouble converting between decimal and binary/hexadecimal, check whether your favorite calculator program has a 'programmer' mode or a way to convert between bases.
 
 :::
 

src/part1/hello_world.md

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ Grab the following files (right-click each link, "Save Link As..."), and place t
 
 Then, still from a terminal within that directory, run the following three commands.
 
-:::warning:⚠️
+:::tip CONVENTION
 
-To clarify where each individual command begins, I've added a `$` before each command, but don't type them!
+To make it clear where each command begins, they are preceded by a `$` symbol. However, do not type it when entering them in your shell!
 
 :::
 

src/part1/registers.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 Alright!
 Now that we know what bits are, let's talk about how they're used.
-Don't worry, this is mostly prep work for the next section, where we will—finally!—look at the code 👀
+Don't worry, this is mostly preliminary work for the next section, where we will—finally!—look at the code 👀
 
 First, if you opened Emulicious, you have been greeted with just the Game Boy screen.
 So, it's time we pop the debugger open!

src/roadmap.md

@@ -10,16 +10,4 @@ Along the way, we will make plenty of mistakes, so we can learn how to debug our
 
 And finally, Part Ⅲ is about "advanced" use of the hardware, where we learn how to make even better-looking games, and we program a Shoot 'Em Up!
 
-:::tip
-
-We hope this tutorial will work for you.
-
-But if it doesn't (the format may not work well for everyone, and that's okay), I encourage you to look at [some other resources](resources.md), which might work better for you.
-
-It's also fine to **take a break from time to time**; feel free to read at your own pace, and to [ask for clarifications](https://gbdev.io/chat) if anything isn't clear to you.
-
-:::
-
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-
 This tutorial is a work in progress.