From 9f2bdc6ef82323c255f9673d98d012e10fcdb00c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Benjamin Schimke Date: Thu, 24 Oct 2024 13:37:27 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Louise K. Schmidtgen --- docs/src/snap/howto/networking/ipv6.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/src/snap/howto/networking/ipv6.md b/docs/src/snap/howto/networking/ipv6.md index 29a73bfe3..143379ab7 100644 --- a/docs/src/snap/howto/networking/ipv6.md +++ b/docs/src/snap/howto/networking/ipv6.md @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ must be IPv6-compatible. ## Setting Up an IPv6-Only Cluster The process of creating an IPv6-only cluster involves specifying only IPv6 -CIDRs for Pods and Services during the bootstrap process. Unlike dual-stack, +CIDRs for pods and services during the bootstrap process. Unlike dual-stack, only IPv6 CIDRs are used. 1. **Bootstrap Kubernetes with IPv6 CIDRs** @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ sudo k8s kubectl get pods -A ``` Deploy a pod with an nginx web-server and expose it via a service to verify -connectivity of the IPv6-only cluster. For that, create a manifest file +connectivity of the IPv6-only cluster. Create a manifest file `nginx-ipv6.yaml` with the following content: ```yaml @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ spec: run: nginx-ipv6 ``` -Deploy it with: +Deploy the web-server and its service by running: ```sh sudo k8s kubectl apply -f nginx-ipv6.yaml